Below is an annotated extract from The Diving Bell and the Butterfly. Please read the extract through carefully and explore the annotations in as much detail as possible.
The learning objective here is to demonstrate the construction of the text for a specific purpose. The writer (Bauby) has used a range of generic conventions to position a specific response from the reader- namely his determination conflicting with his vulnerability. It’s a confronting chapter but we’re engaged by the distinctive and authentic voice which emerges from the limitations of his existence. He is very aware of his situation, but he creates a narrative which is infused with humour, irony and admiration for his desire to be validated as a fellow human being.
As you read it, look at the parts I’ve highlighted and read my annotations. The purpose here is for you to recognise what effective writers do and to use this as a stimulus for your own Composing responses next week.
